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Monday 14 April 2014
Show Don't Tell
I was learning how to write a Show Don't Tell story. The hard part was to think of ides. The easy part for my story was to get ides from my planing that I did Hope we do another Show Don't Tell story. You can't use the word I feel.
I think you have done well at writing this story. It was a difficult task that I gave you when I said to not use "I felt..." You have done a great job of 'showing' us how you were feeling.
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I think you have done well at writing this story. It was a difficult task that I gave you when I said to not use "I felt..." You have done a great job of 'showing' us how you were feeling.
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