Monday, 14 April 2014

Show Don't Tell

I was learning how to write a Show Don't Tell story.  The hard part was to think of ides. The easy part for my story was to get ides from my planing that I did Hope we do another Show Don't Tell story. You can't use the word I feel.

1 comment:

Mrs Graham said...

I think you have done well at writing this story. It was a difficult task that I gave you when I said to not use "I felt..." You have done a great job of 'showing' us how you were feeling.